Revised for half an hour but couldn't get it right, only parts deleted and rewritten

I spent half an hour revising it and still couldn’t get it right—ended up deleting parts and rewriting them.

Tinkering with minor fixes just wasn’t satisfying; it needed a major overhaul. I deleted and rewrote some sections again. I’m not even sure when I’ll finally get it right—just trying my best to finish by six tonight, and I’ll aim to update as much as possible.

(End of chapter)